good riddance

The photo's in the corner. go run and get it. because it'l be lit, if you forget it. the song of love has ended. time for hate to play. i walk a Erie trail. who cares what people say. hush little monster, don't you cry. you'll burn me house. and end my life. stress not, hard worker. there's  light on the other side. don't try to leave and sadly say goodbye. i forgave your foolishness, time after time. but this is were it ends blame your silly lies. grab the box of our memories. screw what you meant to me. you've hurt me mentally, and iv'e lost my peace of mind.

Reviews

[Kitt]

Good riddance indeed. Just outta curiousity, is this based on an expirence you've had, you just for fun?

[Empty Spaces]

exsperience for sure, by the way sorry it took so long for me to answer i really am

[ObscurityNone]

It seems I finally found someone who writes in a similar fashion as I. I would only recommend little touch-ups, such as spelling and grammar. However this is really good, raw, and powerful. I enjoy your natural ability, Jose.

[Empty Spaces]

thanks bro, i really admire your writes as well.

[}Echo{]

Wow.. I really like this. Great write. The flow and rhyme is wonderful. :)

[Empty Spaces]

thank you, especially for giving me feedback. :)

[}Echo{]

:)