man on the edge

As i stand on the ledge. joyous me the man on the ledge! i'm done being depressed. iv'e found myself troubled by a new emotion. Guilt. i step closer to the end of my life. closer to the end of my pledge to love you. i'm hated by the world and all iv'e placed above myself. but still iv'e felt, like no one cares. i jump off the ledge. as i fall, i witness the severity of my choice. but who cares. what do i have left? my life is over. 

Reviews

[Kitt]

Very depression. I've been there too. Depression hurts. It takes a long time to heal but a second to split the wound open again. Good job.