make it on my own.

make it on my own.

A Poem by Empty Spaces

walking in the rain is fine with me, because no one can see my tears. so fine leave me outside. maybe i'll walk fast enough to find a better life. i'll make friends with the rain, so i wont be alone. i'll call this foggy land my home. maybe i'll find a companion in this deep dark canyon, maybe i'll jump down and see.

© 2012 Empty Spaces


Author's Note

Empty Spaces
i wrote this when i got locked out of my house and it started to rain. :)

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Gosh.. like i said i love your writing it just slaps you in the face! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Empty Spaces

11 Years Ago

:) thanks im happy i have a person like you to give me honest feedback

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Empty Spaces
Empty Spaces

The Hole Across The Street, FL



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