I remember

sad

I guess it's true what they say. nice guys finish last. but this pain is overwhelming, and the hate an't going to pass. i guess life is harder when your broken, because you don't know if you want to get fixed. And honestly i don't have time for these schemes or tricks. i remember your last wish, that couldn't granted. but its not my fault talk to the heart you sanded. i remember all the laughs we shared. back when i use to care about being fair. but i learned from you life an't fair. so suck it up,and move on. breath in the air.    

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Siren]

Definitely a good one. I'm really enjoying your writing, and I'm glad you're sharing it with us. Favorite line, by far, is that "Life is harder when you're broken, because you don't know if you want to get fixed." Hit me right i the chest, that one did. I know that pain and indecision all to well. Thanks for being real with us--keep up the great work!

[Empty Spaces]

:) i'm grateful that you took the time to read this

[Siren]

thanks for sending me the request! i'll be happy to read any short stories and poems you send my way (:

[ℰmerald ⚓]

http://youtu.be/3VXXXX9iVPI


This sounds horrible but your depressing feelings make great pieces of writing, I'm not saying I like it when your sad, I'd actually like to see a cheerful poem from you. It would probably be great, maybe it would be about these times your talking about, "i remember all the laughs we shared." There should be a good memory of one of these stuck inside your brain. :)

[Empty Spaces]

thank u and ur right maby i should

[ℰmerald ⚓]

your very welcome, sir.

[Christopher Booyakasha]

wow. that was pretty deep. nice!

[Phillitup]

It's good! The word an't is actually spelled ain't. Unless that's a different word or something...

[C.C. Marx]

"Suck it up, and move on. Breathe the air."
well that's a nice hard slap in the face, let them know self pity ain't worth time or effort, sometimes you gotta push forward through the hard times to get results....nice write

[EllenMichelle29]

Nice work! I love your writing style :)

[A little twist]

I really like how you are direct about it, its like getting slapped in the face :) i like it!

[Empty Spaces]

thank you, thank you i really admire your opinion. :)