come!

very dark

murder come! finish me already! don't slice fast. do it slow and steady. for i want evil to untangle from me. its becoming much to heavy to carry,single handed. shadow hiding in the dark. come attack me! ill stand with my arms spread apart. assassin creeping behind me come forth. kill me, do not wait till i am sleeping! if i shall pick the way i die. let me do so.with my open eyes. aware of what i'm seeing. aware of my despair. feeling the effects of me demise!    

Reviews

[Siren]

Yes, very dark, but quite courageous. Many would rather have it over quickly and not drawn out, in sleep rather than awake and conscious. You're brave enough to look death straight in the eye and tell it to do it's worse. Very well done. Probably my favorite one of yours so far.

[Empty Spaces]

im sooo thankful i truly am.

[Siren]

always welcome :)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Seems to me you need a Slenderman...sad, emotion-rich piece. But we all have a reason for life, you will find your reason of happiness in this dark hole.

[Christopher Booyakasha]

thats was good. very good

[Phillitup]

sad...brave...good...

[EllenMichelle29]

I also though this one was a very well written piece of work. Loved it