alone?

feeling of emptyness

the thoughts that corrupt his mind. he trys to find the humor in the dark, in the hate, in the struggle. is he a coward if he dosent want to fight? i say no! he just wants it all to go. the pain,the hurt, the false sence of hope. just take us. take us to a place were we dont feel alone.

Reviews

[marie]

the dark can indeed be a place that we feel to be the only embrace we ever feel. it is a constant companion and no matter where you go it is always there

[EllenMichelle29]

Nice piece of writing :) Very well written.

[Phillitup]

:) The darkness in this poem surrounds. It is intriguing and well-written

[Empty Spaces]

thank you. im very thankfull for your review