hide and seek

hide and seek

A Poem by Empty Spaces
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remebering love

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she ran fast as she could. but then she fell. she hurt her foot. she crawled in terror. but couldent hide. from this man with theese familiar eyes. blue similar to the ones of an old friend. who this woman once knew. but he climbed a U.S. ARMY jet. and flew, he was in the airforce. he wouldent be back anytime soon. but he promised one day he'd returen to put her in a joyious mood. he'd be back to say........she forgot. the man with the blues eyes looked into hers and softly said "i love you."

© 2012 Empty Spaces


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Empty Spaces
love

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thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


couldn't
wouldn't
joyous

this was good but those are the errors

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2012
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