goodbye

dark love

if i have to blow my brains with lead, then i will just to keep your disturbing face out of my head. if i could i would fill my mind with simplicity. to make the dark thoughts vanish. i hope i made myself clear to you. i hope you just die! so i wont have to see you cry once i say "goodbye"

Author's Note

mixed feelings

Reviews

[ℰmerald ⚓]

they may be mixed feelings but the way you described them worked with your rhyming, I like the last verse, "I hope you die so I won't have to see you cry once I say goodbye" nice work :)

[Empty Spaces]

thank u :)

[ObscurityNone]

It has a nice little rhyming scheme, and the mixed feelings show.

[Empty Spaces]

thanks bro