wait and see

real world

the sand in her hour glass has fallen to the bottom. there she laid. drowning.drowning in her blood. she can almost she her coffin. how dark can life be? how long can this evil feed,of us,and our misery. what sick thoughts can men believe? what twisted goals can these parasites meet? we have no idea so what, we wait and see?

Author's Note

you agree?

Reviews

[bryandc15]

wait and see

[bryandc15]

Wait and see...

[Siren]

I think the most interesting part of this write was the structure. In a way, I feel like there should be more space. However, squishing it all together forces us to read slowly and more carefully. Interesting strategy.

[Empty Spaces]

i greatly appreciate your honesty