F*****g Freak

That's what I am.

A freak.

A stranger.

A misfit.

A loser.

I don't have any friends,

I don't have any home.

I don't have any family,

I am all alone.

I'm a freak.

I'm a nobody.

I'm a loser.

I'm already dead.

Author's Note

Kind of shitty but yeah I got bored and depressed and all moody :P

Reviews

[therapy]

This is amazing and its sad but speaks the truth and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.

[Allan Eddings]

A spiteful, angry poem, shaking its fist at the world that ignores it. Brilliantly composed and delivered with poise, bravo! The brevity of each line fits with the anger that flows through it, one is rarely eloquent or wordy when they are angry, so again congratulations on communicating clearly the poem's intent.

While reading it I could not but help think of the writing of Marcus Aurelius, in particular a line from his Meditations, "Constantly regard the universe as one living being, having one substance and one soul; and observe how all things have reference to one perception, the perception of this one living being; and how all things act with one movement; and how all things are the cooperating causes of all things which exist; observe too the continuous spinning of the thread and the contexture of the web." In short the universe is social and no one and nothing is alone or separate from the whole. Just what came to mind while reading your piece.

Thank you for sharing and I shall have to see what else you have now.

Thank you,
A.E.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

it was so not s****y... i really liked it and can so relate

[JC]

your'e free from any bonds is what you are, your'e nowhere near being alreadydead, but i get what you are saying

[trippy kitty]

This was great. I could relate a lot.

[Caitlyn Murray]

Wow. I could relate so much!

[paradise]

Its good and definatly not s****y