roes are red

roes are red 

violets are blue 

i see to love 

your kisses

roes are red 

violets are blue

i cant stop

seeing you

rose are red 

violets are blue

i wont stop 

seeing you

roes are red

violets are blue 

the world will stop 

when you die

so i love you good bye

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

cute... reminds me of that song that says "She stopped loving me today..." Interesting premise, but what happens if there is an afterlife? Not saying there is one, but what if? --lol In my opinion (IMO), your phrase "The world will stop" will sound stronger in this write as "My world will stop"...IMO.... Nice work, I like your emphasis of points using colors (red for roses, blue for good bye), very creative. Thanks.

[Backlight Burner]

The first stanza honestly confused me. Everything else was really good and has a great flow and rhyme with it. I love the last line, it is my favorite thing about this poem :)

[aj Foxley]

gives some really neat imagery. I keep trying to think of a backstory to all this, and its an inspiration.

[Marie]

This is a very nice love poem; says so much...

[Lyghea]

awww. this was so cute