kisses

K-kissing you

I-in love with you

S-saving ever moment with you

S-saving every kiss with you

E-everday we kiss to the end of time

S-special moment shared just with you

           love is in the air.

Reviews

[xx]

An acrostic. :)

It's been a while since I last browsed poetry pieces, and while I can't say that this piece sticks out above all others, there is a neatness to this poem that makes it pleasant to read. You could make some changes, though:

I think you meant "savoring" instead of "saving" in both "S" lines - and perhaps "kissing UNTIL the end of time" is what you meant? In any case, as I said before, the poem is neat and pleasant. Keep writing!

-Mina

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

aw, this is so very lovely. great poem :)

[Jack Isaac]

So as a picture says a thousand words, then a kiss says it all. Nice bit of creativity with this, that's what poetry is all about... to say it all with creativity... and the effect is the best high in the world.

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Nice poem!

[Lyghea]

nice first poem you got there!!! keep it up... stay strong!!!(: