1st Step

1st Step

A Poem by Lord R.A.P
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To every action there is a reaction, chain reaction.

"
Moves are made
a movement emerges
sharp as blade
reality reverses
the plan is designed
keep in motion!
from the first location
keepin track of the destination
driven by ambition 
with a great deal of motivation
the 1st step is made
and so many are to follow.

© 2013 Lord R.A.P


Author's Note

Lord R.A.P
not 100% about the grammar so please let me know, and of course critics lead to improvement

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I enjoyed reading this !
I am also very new to this site and would greatly appreciate any feedback in a review on my first and only piece,
Thank you and keep sharing you talents!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord R.A.P

11 Years Ago

thanks i sure will
This is really good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord R.A.P

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
i am new to this site and this is my very first poem, i personally like it and i hope most of its readers do as well, thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Lord R.A.P
Lord R.A.P

Jamaica, NY



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