without you

without you

A Poem by eun su

your arms are wrapped arround my neck,is a mirage.
my lips burns when i call out your name.
my whole body keeps trembling.
and my heart keeps beating ;
as if it's going to burst out of my chest.
      .like volcano.
i live happily as the grieve kills me
       .in your absence.
i smile and laugh with friends like other
        .odinary teenagers.
but i'm trying to hide my longing for you.
trying to cease on crying myself to sleep.
simply,trying to forget you.....
trying to forget the person whom
his  presence made me strong as a women.
whom his absence made me weak as a child.
your tender love used to warm me from the
     icy cold winter's nights.
your fiery love used to light up my darkness
and my longing for you makes me forget how
               cruel my life has been.
simply, i'm here without you writing
our memory, drawing your face, dreaming of your love
one last time.and lest the time will erase you from
     my head one day what if it was tomorrow.

                                                                                          

© 2013 eun su


Author's Note

eun su
thnx for reading enjoy!

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I like several things about this one. With minor brush ups it would sing! Love and devotion drive many poets mad, but when its unrequited love its twice as bad.


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HELLO I4M EUN 16 YEARS OLD WELL THAT'S NOT MY REAL NAME CAUSE I'M NOT KOREAN (YET). I LOVE WRITING U JUST WRITE ABOUT MU LIFE EXPRIENCE AND JUST TO FREE MY MIND AND UNLEACH MY TALENT. THNX FOR READING.. more..

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