Hidden Angels

First Poem :)

Hidden Angels

Like a poet to its beat
The strongest always take the heat

Like a writter to their ways
The brightest are always
their best days

Like a bird with their wings
Imagination sours in many ways


When a purpose takes place
Live it up till your last days

Your like an angel without wings
A hidden soul, lost in the worlds ways.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

"when a purpose takes place
Live it up till your last days", this one has hit me with a message... I would say this was a brilliant poem to start with and you did well enough here... Your thoughts are perfectly place here... Simple and very thoughtful.....