My Friend

My Friend

A Poem by abderrahmane dakir


Keep a distance from your lover,

If you want to hear their laughter.

Don't tell your sorrow to other,

If you want to strengthen your character.




Keep your problems in you,

No one could solve your issue.




Take care of your enemy,

But don't trust anybody.





Don't promise when you are glad,

Don't decide when you are sad.



Keep your smile on your face,

If you want to win more friends.

© 2016 abderrahmane dakir


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"Don't promise when you are glad"... I agree with that.
, because when you are glad, your brain is not functioning normally (maybe because of excitement) and you tend to mention words or even make promises that you don't actually mean. Lol
I also believe that one should not make a decision when he is sad, because sadness may push him to make an unsound decision that he will regret afterwards.

I am confused of "take care of your enemy" but I think you have your own reason for that.
Nice piece. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

abderrahmane dakir

8 Years Ago

Hi Dhaye,

Take care for enemy because their are a human being that have soul. It's a .. read more



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"Don't promise when you are glad"... I agree with that.
, because when you are glad, your brain is not functioning normally (maybe because of excitement) and you tend to mention words or even make promises that you don't actually mean. Lol
I also believe that one should not make a decision when he is sad, because sadness may push him to make an unsound decision that he will regret afterwards.

I am confused of "take care of your enemy" but I think you have your own reason for that.
Nice piece. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

abderrahmane dakir

8 Years Ago

Hi Dhaye,

Take care for enemy because their are a human being that have soul. It's a .. read more

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Added on January 7, 2016
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