Zombie

My body is empty.

yet heavy

My soul has left me

I'm not alive

nor am I dead

my head throbs

Almost carefree

but sickly

depressingly

I can't move

but I do

through each day

the will to live has gone

but I remain

the same

Reviews

[Jack Reaper]

so simple, yet so deep. beautifully done

[Shelby]

thank you so much :D

[Gem-muziqprincess]

Great piece. Your a great talented writer. I enjoyed reading this :)

[Shelby]

thank you so much, means a lot coming from someone who can write like you :)

[Gem-muziqprincess]

Thank you my dear:) &your very welcome.

[Bare Trees]

This is really well done and has a style about it that is appealing. You didn't get carried away with the descriptions which I like. It's Just the right amount. The picture compliments it well. Watch the b at the end of through. Great job.

[Shelby]

thank you so much, that's really nice :) I didn't even notice the b! haha

[Distant horizons]

Life does have so much heaviness pulling us down, but the fleeting moments of joy/happiness/satisfaction can pull us up to see more. Beautifully expressed feelings.

[Shelby]

thank you so much :)

[Distant horizons]

Welcome :-)