What Happened?

What Happened?

A Poem by Maddy
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Another rambling poem from a mind that doesn't make sense.

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Fell in love
Not sure how
But yet it is there

Ask me to be yours
I was always
But you were never mine

Am I just the next girl to chase?
The next one you say you love?
The next one in the twisted line?

We were sister and brother
Yet now you seem to want something different
Or is this just a cruel joke you are playing on my heart?

I stood by you
You stood by me
Now... I feel we have lost that security

What happened to the boy I once knew?
What happened to the one I loved?
Loved, in more ways than one

© 2014 Maddy


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I've felt like both the female of this poem and the male before. Great job, I really like the how I was able to feel the confusion. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but I thought it really worked out nicely for your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Maddy

10 Years Ago

Thank you. The confusion was slightly intentional I suppose.
I have definitely felt like this before. Check out my poem Mourning Darien, it has a similar concept. You did a great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Maddy

10 Years Ago

Thanks. I will definitely be checking out your poetry :)
Shaquana Adams

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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