Stranger

Stranger

A Poem by Maddy
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A transformation from brother to stranger.

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He broke bit by bit
Each blow worse than the last
She played him like a game
Toying with who he was
I watched the transformation
Saw the terror in his eyes
And he fell out of my grasp
Drifting away from who he was
She kept coming back with a smile
Saying she changed
And he believed her
Believed the girl who left him every time
Maybe it was a fascination
Maybe he was really in love
He wanted to marry her
Both only 16
And then he snapped
I knew he was gone
The boy I knew as a friend
As a sibling
He is still here
His body that is
Breathing, talking to me
But the soul I knew is long gone
Replaced by a stranger

And that stranger is all I have left.

© 2014 Maddy


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What emotion poured out in this one. Felt my heart dropped in the end. The last stanza.....powerful!!!!! Enjoyed! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Maddy

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing :)

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