ABUSED

ABUSED

A Poem by WildChild😜
"

Just playing around

"

Again the hitting begins!

Bruising shows up on my ivory skin the color of plums.

Useless cries fill the room

Someone?! anyone?!

Echoing walls copy my words, until finally

Death covers me like a blanket wrapping me in darkness. 

© 2015 WildChild😜


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I feel that your wording is very good for all the letters of "ABUSE". All, except for "E". I don't know if I find it awkward with the word "copy" or amazing because of the word "copy". But it's a good poem, nevertheless.
The ending...I was not expecting that. A strong way to end a poem though, good job on this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WildChild😜

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on January 7, 2015
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