Caged Bird Sings

Caged Bird Sings

A Poem by 1 Deep
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Feeling restricted..

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I feel restricted
I try to fly, 
But when I expand my wings to be lifted
They hit the walls
The barriers designed just for me
Sometimes I ponder how this could be
Was it destined?
From an egg, was it known 
By a mind greater than my own
That this would be my home?
Or did I make a mistake 
Did I fall into a trap because of my lust for bait?
Misfortune or fate 
I do not know 
But it seems there is nowhere for me to go
I'm lonely from head to toe
So here is my song
I will sing at night
And all the day long 
How I wish to be free....

© 2018 1 Deep


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A caged bird will die. Spirit and heart fade away to nothing. Powerful and strong words and thoughts. Most prisons made by us. We must knock-down or climb over. Freedom is in reach. Education and proper direction. This world need more concern, kindness and we need to listen to each other. Thank you for sharing the powerful and worthwhile words and thoughts.'
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 Deep

6 Years Ago

thanks for the thoughtful commenting
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and I enjoyed your work.
Well written, and slightly sad, but so is life.
Thank you, I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely composed. At times every one of us becomes that caged bird.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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