True Love

Been through the forest,
Asked every tree where she hid.
Conquered each mountain top
Seeking her face at the ridge.
Flew to the stars;
Inquired of her whereabouts.
Interrogated the moon,
Hoping to flush her out.
Went to the sea;
Deepest part I could find.
Submerged my soul,
And searched it for miles at a time.
Yet, this phantomly figure,
Legend, folklore;
Eternally eluded sight
'Till I searched no more.

Reviews

[Han'ke]

Well written, rhythmical - I loved it ❤ (Albeit sad still)

[1 Deep]

thanks for the honest comment

[Chris Shaw]

I like very much the idea behind this poem and it is well executed. A pleasant trip to find the whereabouts of elusive love.

Chris

[1 Deep]

thank you for commenting

[kookoobananas]

I love the beginning, it starts out super strong and I think the last line is very strong as well, but I think you could elaborate just a tad bit more on how she/true love itself is folklore, etc. just my thoughts! loved it otherwise.

[1 Deep]

Thanks, a great writer like yourself always has something relevant to say. Appreciate the honest feedback.