Corrupted AngelA Story by ShannonA short piece about a man who picks out his prey.Eyes that glowed like the moonlight
against the darkening sky and as frosty as the snow that lay on the ground of
Central Park on a cold winter’s night held small orbs of piercing green irises.
The eyes that had once been gentle and caring, light-hearted and free now
burned with intensity and a hidden violence. They had once caressed her skin
with a fleeting glance but now they tore through her soul with a menacing hate.
Those eyes had been the last thing she’d seen. And, when her last dying breath had escaped
her chapped, parted lips the eyes softened once again. The man who owned the
eyes sighed deeply, she had struggled more than he had anticipated. Slipping
his arms under her limp body he carried her up the stairs to his bathroom where
he would prepare the body. As he clunked up the thin, and narrowing, staircase
her head bounced. Her ash blonde hair covered her staring, accusing, baby blue
eyes. It had been her almost white hair that had first caught his attention only
a week ago. He had been on his way home from work
and a bright halo attracted him. He could see an angel amidst the crowd. She
had a large black bag on one shoulder; a folder stuck out of it and revealed
several wads of messy note papers. She was a college student. She was walking
briskly in the light April shower that danced down from the rain clouds heading
for a darker alley. She looked behind her for a moment as if she could feel the
heat of his gaze upon her. At that moment he decided, he would
keep her in the basement, section one. She had baby blue eyes, as soft as felt
and rosy pink cheeks from the icy rain which splashed on her face and clung to
her long, sweeping eyelashes. Her lips were painted red which contrasted
against her china doll complexion. His eyes sparkled; china doll, perfect. In
her hand she was clutching something, but she turned away before he could work
out what it was. She was heading down
the route to his car. A ghost of a smile flickered across his lips. Slowly,
invisibly, he headed to the alley. The rooftops almost touched here and
were a canopy against the rain and the already dimming light of the day. His
eyes darted around, he had lost her. His anger began to boil in the pit of his
stomach and his eyes began to narrow. This was the beginning of it, it always
was. There was a bubbling sensation in the pit of his stomach, a clenching fist
around his heart and the constriction of his lungs as his chest closed around
them. His mouth became dry and his face warm, until, amongst the darkest of
shadows there was a couple of sparks of light. He saw them illuminate her
angelic face, the bubbling ceased, the constriction dispersed and he realised
how she would be displayed. “Need a light?” He asked as he heard
her cursing, the lighter in her hand feebly dying in the now bitter wind. So,
it had been a lighter in her delicately thin hand. As he spoke her eyes whipped
up to the coming male. She judged him, her eyes dancing curiously over the
largely built male. He held out the little gadget in his hand, an offering of
friendship. She gingerly reached out and took it trying to light the cigarette
between her fingers. It refused to light. “Here, have one of mine,” he chuckled
at her misfortune. “Thanks,” She said sliding one from the
packet. This one lit fine now that it was shielded away from the merciless
rain. She handed the lighter back to him placing the thin release to her lips
and drawing it deep into her chest. The pulse of silvery smoke slipped from
between the red lips up into the air. Her lipstick had left an oily red mark on
the cigarette. “What you doing back here? It’s a bit
dangerous, pretty girls like you.” He lit up his own cigarette, a different
brand to the one he had offered. He drew in a deep breath, he felt stronger
now, more confident. “I’m alright,” she moved back crossing
her arms. He had been too forward, now she would be wary of him, watching his
every move. “Just be careful, alright? Don’t want
to see another girl in the newspaper, too tragic too young. At least you’re one
of those girls who are decent enough to keep themselves covered, not asking for
trouble. And, you look just as pretty as those girls.” He kept his tone light,
controlled. He couldn’t tell her how her slim legs led up to a round a*s which
swayed as she walked, although they were covered in tight denim. He couldn’t
say how the pastel blue shirt complimented her eyes and how her lips invited
him to taste them with his own. “Thanks,” she said smiling slightly.
“I’m Jenny,” she made eye contact with him now. He placed the cigarette against
his lips and she copied; a trait he had learnt in his years, smokers will try
to keep up with those around them " just like drinkers. “Ash,” he said after puffing out a
trail of silver. He had adopted the name after his first victim, he set her aflame
and watched her body ripple and melt in the heat and he had loved the sense of
power. He no longer knew his name; he was Ash and forever would be. “Are these typical cigs?” She asked
looking at the one in her hand. “Yeah, why? Well they’re transported
from America for me, cheaper. They’re also a little stronger, sorry, I should
have told you.” He apologised to her, her facial features softened. “That’s what it’ll be then. I only
recently took up smoking the boyfriend has me addicted to them.” She laughed
nervously. “Ah, how long you been with your man?”
He asked curiously, he showed no resentment just pure curiosity. It had been
close; she had noticed the subtle change between the normal cigarettes and the
ones which he had made. He congratulated himself mentally as she took up a
conversation, her words slowly being lost to the power of the drugs. They were walking together, conversing
in the shadows of the alley, an innocent thing to do; little did she know that
around the next corner sat his car. They rounded the corner, his car was in
sight. He quickly glanced at his watch, it had been exactly two minutes since
she had finished her cigarette, its discarded butt left trodden on the floor. “Well, this is my car.” He said
innocently smiling at her. “Can I give you a lift home?” The weather was on his
side, as he spoke the heavens opened and the rain fell heavily. “Let me give
you a lift home, please.” He said; his voice showed no other cause than trying
to be a gentleman. It took her a while to blink as she swayed on the spot. “O-okay then...” she stuttered. He led
her around the front of his car and opened the door politely. She stepped in
and sat on the leather seat. He closed the door, rounded the car and climbed
into the driver’s seat. “Where to?” He asked as they strapped
in. “Crest Hill, Chatsworth” she said
quietly. “I know the place,” he smiled, starting
the engine before heading down the road. It was a fifteen minute car ride and
they had been ten minutes talking about general topics. “I, I don’t feel too good.” She said
softly, her elbows rested on her knees and her head was propped up by her
hands. “I’ll have you home in five minutes,
you can go lie down then. Let me look at you,” she raised her head as they
stopped due to a red light. Her eyes were bloodshot and her pupils huge. Her
lips were dry and she was finding it hard to keep her eyes open. He placed his
hand on her head and mocked thinking. “There’s a bug going around, you might
have caught it at college.” He said before shrugging, the drugs were working.
“Just sit back and close your eyes, we’ll be home before you know it.” He said.
She did as he suggested and, instead of turning left towards Chatsworth he
turned right to Lofthouse. Suddenly her body slumped forward; perfect. “Jenny, Jenny?” He said shaking her
slightly. She was out cold. The basement of his house had been
split into three sections. Each section had; a mattress with a pillow and a
blanket, a bucket for unwanted waste (with a toilet roll) and a door which led
to the stairs. Sections one and three were the smaller and section two the
biggest. Jenny had been kept in section one for a week and every so often Ash
would go down and treat her with some entertainment. He would come and converse
with her as she was tied to the pipe which ran around the edge of the brightly
painted blue walls. Ash liked the colour blue; it reminded him of the sea. If Jenny shouted at him or spoke to him
in a way that would annoy her he would gag her, make her shut up and then he
would continue his conversation although he was the only one now speaking. Jenny’s death had been an early one; he
had planned on keeping her for a month or so before killing her but she
wouldn’t stay delicate that long. She would have wilted like a flower. As he washed over her body, the marks
on her neck now deepening in colour, his creative mind over took the brutal
one. He washed over her slim, toned figure and supple assets. He cleansed her
body of all traces of sin that had ever been committed against her in either
the previous week or before and he blessed her body. He washed her hair and
when she was dried it shone beautifully as the light hit it. He turned her onto her front as he
brought out a large box from under his bed. He opened it, inside was a large
pair of white, feather wings. The wings were about three feet long but light
for their size. He placed them in position on her back and, with a needle and a
white thread; he began to sew them into place. It took him most of the night
but when he had finished he was in awe. “You are beautiful,” he whispered in
her ear. “Let us see what, my darling, is on the
television,” he said flicking it on as he towel dried the beauty laid on his
bed. A woman was sat behind the desk with a large image of a globe spinning
behind her. She held a stack of papers, although she didn’t need them, and
looked at the camera, straight through the screen and to Ash. She could see him
now, he thought, could see what he did, the whole world could. He jumped up and
in a paranoid fashion whipped the curtains closed. “Police in the Chatsworth area are
asking for any witnesses to come forward in the search for missing Jenny
Harvard, a seventeen year-old, college student. She was last seen leaving
Charleston bus station Saturday afternoon.” Ash leant forward and quickly
switched the set off. “See my love, people are searching for
you, we will let them find you soon though.” He smiled and opened up the
wardrobe. He began to undress; his clothes were then folded and placed in the
washing bin neatly. It did not seem weird to him to be
stood naked in a room with a dead, naked woman. He did not feel a sexual
attraction at this time, his lust had been and past; it had been fulfilled
earlier the week. He reached into the wardrobe and his
drawers and dressed in a smart yet casual outfit. He then pulled out a bag from
the bottom of his wardrobe and turned to the body which still stared painfully
at the ceiling. From the black, plastic carrier bag he
pulled out a white dress which girls used to make themselves look innocent when
out on a night. He then pulled out a white lace bra and a pair of matching
panties. He laid them all out on the bed beside her before beginning to dress
her. He was slow and careful, he wore a pair of gloves at all time, he had from
the beginning, and eventually she was dressed. He sat her in the chair in front
of his dresser and tied her in place with a few scarves, her head held up by
his hand. He gently began brushing her slightly wavy hair. He hummed and spoke
to her like a father would to a scared child. Her eyes represented that, a girl
who had screamed for her mother when he descended upon her earlier that day. He then took a needle and a thread and
parted her hair. He took the halo which was held up by two thin, almost
invisible, wire and placed it on her head in the correct position. Then he
began to sew. He turned the chair so she faced him
and he smiled, the halo fit perfectly and the red blood on her head looked
beautiful. He opened up an old tool box and within it was makeup of every type
for every occasion. “I acquired this one just for you,” he
held up a silvery blue eye shadow before placing it on the desk beside him. He
brought up several tubs and tubes and pots of makeup before beginning. He rid her of her bruising neck, the
dark circles under her eyes, and the bruise on her left cheekbone and bruises
on her wrists. He applied the silvery blue eye-shadow, the thin lines of black
on her eyes. He curled her lashes and made her cheeks as rosy as the day he met
her. He painted her lips blood red and lined them in a beautiful pout. He
smiled like a proud father and began to paint her nails with more care than any
professional beauty therapist in a matching red. He placed a pair of ballet
shoes on her feet and he sat back. His angel was perfect. He had to think where
the perfect display cabinet was for her now. He walked around the house, cooking
food and watching television as he pondered the thought. Then it hit him, he would place her in
the place angels belongs; the Cathedral. She could be seen by all then. It was ten am; Ash had arrived awaiting
the people to come and pray for their Sunday service. It wasn’t until half ten
when a woman screamed. She was pointing up to the crucifix of Jesus where an
angel now knelt praying; her hands stitched in an eternal prayer. And Ash left, his job done, his
attachment to his work " to the girl, lost. © 2010 ShannonAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on June 4, 2010 Last Updated on June 4, 2010 AuthorShannonWakefield, West Yorkshire, United KingdomAboutHey, my name is Shannon and I'm a eighteen year old student. I'm currently studying Childcare and BSL :) I love to read and write, it's my own way of disappearing from the world around me and in.. more..Writing
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