Why?

Why?

Why does it always have to

be her?

She is a friend 

But why do all the guys like her

Yes she can be nice

But can be strange.

When will it be 

My turn to be liked

Why is it never

ME?

WHY?

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

A good poem! And I know what you are feeling.

[Satan's Daughter]

I feel you. It seems that there is one person that, despite their numerous flaws, is worshipped by all. Just isn't fair sometimes...

[Belle]

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!

[Darkening Shadow]

Line eight "she" instead of "she's"
Line twelve seems to end short
Little too spaced out
Nice Job! Just needs some work.

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Good idea for the poem, but it's a little choppy. Condense some of the lines, and my rating will go up for sure!

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Here's my idea:


Why?
Why does it always have to
be her?
She is a friend
But why do all the guys like her
Yes she can be nice

Just condensed a few lines, but there's my idea.

[Belle]

Thank you and which lines should I condense?

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Good job condensing the lines! I think it flows better now. :)

[Unicorn Princess]

I agree. It does seem like some people are liked more then other and I know the feeling sometimes you just have to deal with it and hope.

[Belle]

Thank you Unicorn Princess