You say three words, I say two.

You know what? Keep your three, I know my two.

I. Love. You.

Three words.

That's all he had to say and I was his.

He knew it too.

He knew that I would do anything he wanted after he said that.

But I couldn't.

For once in my life I needed to find some self control.

I could feel his hot breath on my neck as I whispered the two words that I knew would paralyze him with fear.

You're lying.

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

Three words. Just three words:
This is amazing.

That is all I can say. I really liked this piece of writing. However, it is a little short. If it could be expanded on a little more, it could be really amazing. It would be interesting to know more about the relationship between the two characters. Indeed, if you are hell-bent on 'improving' the other piece of writing currently titled "Confused..." then maybe you could combine these two works to make a slightly longer story?

[Saki]

The concept of this story was very good. I would have hoped though that you add more to the story. It feels like it ended too suddenly. Very nicely written though.