Falling

Falling

A Poem by lady rebekah
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This is a poem about Love ... about a burning desire to become lost in your lover ...

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I am falling ... falling ...
into the cavern of your eyes.
so big, so brown, so loving,
they are calling to me,
speaking silent words into my soul.
& I become powerless,
my heart cannot turn away.
I have only one desire now,
to lose myself comepletly,
into the essence of you.
to become devoured,

by your loving kisses.

© 2012 lady rebekah


Author's Note

lady rebekah
This is one of my most recent poems, I hope you all enjoy it.
Any feedback, tips or hints will be taken into consideration.

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simple, short, and sweet. if there is any criticism it would be that perhaps the end doesn't flow as well as the beginning, then again the beginning is quite impressive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, yup, you have the magic touch. Your words are beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 21, 2012
Last Updated on March 21, 2012
Tags: Romance, Love, sultry, seduction

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lady rebekah
lady rebekah

Bonners Ferry, ID



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I'm a hopeless romantic, who loves anything about love & romance, the steamier the better! I also love writing about it ... & everyone who has read my stories has told me that I'm good enough to make .. more..

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