Not Allowed

Not Allowed

A Poem by H.N.Seal
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Do not love yourself because society says so.

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Mama told me to love me for me
But how can I love me for me when I am in a society that says that it is wrong
Do not love your body for it can be better
Do not love your smile for it could be whiter
Do not love your hair for it is too fine
Do not love your eyes for they are too dull
Do not love your skin for it is flawed 
Do not love yourself for you can be better
Do not love yourself for the society makes money on the things you hide from
Do not love yourself for it is not allowed in the society that thrives off our pain

© 2017 H.N.Seal


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So true and sad. Nowadays, the only thing we are allowed is to spew empty praise on those who don't deserve it.

As much as I liked your writing here; I would suggest including/looking up using metaphors and similes; this way your writing would have more impact and your feelings more punch to the reader.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Truer words were never spoken

Posted 7 Years Ago


cute and sentimental.
super beautiful.
keep up

Posted 7 Years Ago


This one speaks to everything women feel. Crazy how our insecurities are the dollars in corporate pockets. Thanks for the though provoking work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


So true and sad. Nowadays, the only thing we are allowed is to spew empty praise on those who don't deserve it.

As much as I liked your writing here; I would suggest including/looking up using metaphors and similes; this way your writing would have more impact and your feelings more punch to the reader.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Taz
This is so true yet so sad. You really captured the way society kills the way people see others. Amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago



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H.N.Seal
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