Storm

sliding down the glass

the rain falls

into my eyes

my smile gets dampened

and my tears blur

the page before me

streaks with rage

from the smear.

 

late '89

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

ahhh an emotional storm...I am very familiar with these. There are nights when all I can do is cry...brought on by something so mundane and simple that I know it is a release for all the emotions I keep hidden from the world so well. Very very nicely done.

laura :-)

[Aaron J. Wald]

so short, but packed with such emotion. I can relate, but I really thought a longer poem would make me tear up more: you proved me wrong. I will describe your poem in one word: Lovely. And I hope you write more like it.