she country

She’s country, and she’s home grown

And she’s as pretty as she is smart

She towers, but oh well

Her size matches her big ole’ heart

She longs for someone to call her baby

And for someone who finally won’t hurt her

She strives to be wanted

And sometimes the things that are important

Get lost in the translation

She forgets that she’s country that she’s home grown

And that she’s as pretty as she is smart

All she sees is her towering height

And sorta forgets about her big ole’ heart

All she wants is someone to love her

To be someone’s girl

To be the one that can’t be lost

For someone that makes her remember that…

She’s country that she’s home grown

And damn she’s as pretty as she is smart

She towers, but he don’t care

Cause he loves her for her big ole’ heart <3

 

Reviews

[Silent Wolf]

That must be me, but I'm not that tall...

[beautiful dreamer]

haha its me

[Silent Wolf]

Still lol.

[Sami Geiger]

We are she country! And Thayer has a friend named thayne. He is the sweetest thing. And i told him about you and he is actually considereing it(:

[beautiful dreamer]

all the way over there? its one thing to have a best friend in another state it is a whole nother thing to have a boyfriend in another state!

[Sami Geiger]

I have done it plenty of times.

[beautiful dreamer]

lol. your not me! lol

[beautiful dreamer]

but i trust you sooo okay okay

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, I really like this! It reminds me of the song "She's Country" by: Jason Aldean. Especially the first line reminds me of that song for sure! I know how it feels to want and desire a guy to want you for who you are no matter what you look like. I do want a guy to love and care for me for who I am from deep inside. In my opinion, I think that's how every girl should be treated. I'm tired of people getting mistreated for their appearance, when they have the biggest heart ever! Great job on this piece. I think this is your first piece that I've read by you. I'm thoroughly impressed by it too! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[beautiful dreamer]

Thanks so much! it means so much to me that people read and review my writing

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome! I know what you exactly mean :)

[Sami Geiger]

aww(:

[beautiful dreamer]

lol.now all i need is a guy who actually tells me all that lol

[Patrick Henry]

Sweet sweet poem.... Made me think of the song "She's my baby" by Van Morrison while I was reading your poem. I like it..... Very nicely done with the ending that also introduced the poem!! Beautiful.... xoxo -Mark

[beautiful dreamer]

thanks :)

[Patrick Henry]

Some poems seem destined to become songs..... like THIS one!! Have you written any? xoxo -Mark

[beautiful dreamer]

one lol. goodbye forever. its on here somewhere

[Patrick Henry]

You're saying goodbye?!! Don;t say goodbye! A country girl would never... maybe she would.... say goodbye to a nice guy. *wink* lol Wait. Is there a song on this site you wrote? xoxo -Mark

[beautiful dreamer]

lol no thats the name of the song lol

[Patrick Henry]

Can I hear you sing, "Goodbye, forever"?

[beautiful dreamer]

lol nope. i have no way of recording it

[Patrick Henry]

Youtube!! ...and make it loooooooud!! I'm kidding. You could use your phone and send it to your email, which would handle the program for you. I wonder what you sound like now... also wondering what the POEM would sound like if you read it aloud. : ) xoxo -Mark

[InsanityWriter]

So sweet! I love this one. :) It could be a song. ^_^

[beautiful dreamer]

aw thanks

[Lover Of Words]

i love this one

[beautiful dreamer]

thanks kelsey kels