she sits alone

she sits alone

A Poem by beautiful dreamer

she sits alone
one hand holding food
the other on her trackpad
no one ever bothers to sit down
but she doesn't care
who ever said you needed people?
she sits alone. 

© 2012 beautiful dreamer


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You will never hate being alone as long as you like the person you are there with.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

yup :)
Short but full of emotion, I really do like it. It speaks out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

thanks :)
Hey, this is really deep! You have touched upon something I think is a very disturbing trend in today's society. I remember when I was much younger riding a city bus before electronic devices were so prevalent. People used to talk to each other, even strangers, but nowadays most people are plugged into one kind of device or another and conversation on the bus has vertually ceased. Not many people seem to notice this happening, for they are too caught up in themselves so much so that we are becoming individually secular.
A very thought provoking poem, good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

it was more about me having no in flesh friends and all good friends on the web, but thanks for the .. read more
william keepers

12 Years Ago

You are very welcome and thank you for clarifying! I get what you mean though, and can relate for I .. read more
beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

thank you i will
Epic. Normally people abase themselves with others whom they find intimidating because of intelligence, or from the pressures of pop culture, this shows that you are different, which in my opinion is good, because if we all followed pop culture, we would all be the same. Lovely expression

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
Jordan's Back

12 Years Ago

No Problem, Swing a friend request my way if you like, :) I will set with you
beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

cool i will
Very touching imagery.
Some hints can be felt,while the crux of the situation needs to be explained.
Nicely penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
zainul

12 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This was me the other day... A bunch of my friends who I have classes with weren't there. :/ Nice job. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

i just don't have friends right now...
InsanityWriter

12 Years Ago

:( *hugs*
beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

:)
:/ tch! your absolutely right who needs'em

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

:)

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Garrett, IN



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