alone

for the writers cafe blues aka no ones on! and my loneliness..

i munch quietly in my corner

tears standing till in my eyes

nobody even notices

surprise surprise

maybe it's time to accept 

the loneliness washing over me

cuz i'm afraid that these people 

friends never will be to me

Reviews

[cloud]

I find this true to some degree. Good subject.

[Angela ☄️]

This is heart stomping, and it has a very good beat to it. And I hope everything gets better. :)

Bright blessings!

[beautiful dreamer]

thank you!

[william keepers]

beautiful, you have a way of writing that is somehow both blunt and innocent. Very unique indeed! I like the way you structured it as a vertical wave pattern. Mixed feelings I'm guessing. What I know about waves is that they always rise and fall. Sometimes they get quite choppy, but we just keep learning to ride them either way, and never forget that calming waters do return!
There is an s missing in the second line, but otherwise, this is really good!

[beautiful dreamer]

thank you!

[Lover Of Words]

Love this i know the feeling trust me

[beautiful dreamer]

thank you!