vivian 12A Story by beautiful dreamerI hurried through my chores,
avoiding everyone. They couldn’t find out yet. It had to be a surprise. I was
half way through mucking out Ella’s stall when I heard Delanie’s voice behind
me asking, “how was the big date?” I dropped the pitchfork spun around and
tucked my hands behind my back. “great!” I say with a smile and step back,
right on the pitchfork, which flings up and smacks me in the back of the head.
“OW!” I cry my left hand flying to my head. Then Delanie saw it. “Ohmigosh, is
that…” she starts loudly. I bound at her and cover her mouth. “SHHHH. Nobody
knows yet.” I hiss. She nods and I let her go. “Your secrets safe with me
Vivi.” She whispers, starting to walk away. I follow her. “Do not tell a soul!”
I call after her. I feel a tap on my shoulder and I turn around slowly. “Tell
what?” my father asks. Me,
mom, and Dad gather in the family room, their eyes planted on me. “it’s nothing
bad.” I say smiling at their worried stares. They look skeptical. “In fact it’s
GOOD news.” I say and then sigh, seeing no change in their expression. I hold
out my left hand, which I’ve been hiding. “I’m engaged, that’s my big secret.”
I mutter. Then mom explodes with happy squeals, grabbing my hand and scanning
the ring. “Oh it’s beautiful!” she cries and pulls me into a hug. “My baby’s
getting married!” she cries then turns to dad. “Can you believe it Hank?” she
asks. He shakes his head slowly a smile forming on his face. “No I can’t but
I’m happy.” He says and I smile tearfully. “You are?” I ask. He nods. “Of
course, my baby girl is happy and with a man I approve of. Of course I’m happy. I was just afraid you
were pregnant or something.” He explains. I roll my eyes. “Dad I’m abstinent
and you know it. I took a pledge when I was sixteen.” I say impatiently. “I
know I know, let’s just forget I said anything” He says waving his hand. I
laugh. “This calls for a celebratory breakfast!” Mom says and hurries into the
kitchen I laugh and follow her. I
stand outside of Temperance’s Barn wringing my hands. This was big, how do you
break news like this? before I lost all courage I hurry into the barn and run
straight into Temp, who has her saddle in her arms and is headed out the barn.
“Oof! Temp, where are you going with your saddle?” I ask confused, forgetting
slightly why I’m here. She sighs and sits the saddle down. “Viv, I have
something to tell you…” she starts. “Oh so do I!” I say remembering my purpose
there. “you go first.” She says. I shake my head. “No you say what you were
going to.” I reply. She frowns. “on the count of three. Say it.” She says and
counts off “One..two..three!” I thro out my left hand and shout “I’m engaged!”
my hand collides with hers and I hear a metal hitting together. I look down at
our hands and see her hand has a ring on it too. “Wait what…?” I asked
confused. “I’m getting married too.” She says sheepishly. I shriek jump up and
down and then hug her hard. “Congratulations! When did he ask!” I exclaim. She
hugs me back. “In Saratoga. I push her away. “what?” I screech. She looks down.
“why didn’t you tell me, that was like three weeks ago. I injured my self
waiting eight hours!” I exclaim angrily, and smack her on the shoulder. “I’m
sorry Viv, I just had to time it right.” She says. I frown angrily until
something hits me. “Temp… were going to be sisters.” Says slowly. She smiles and nods. “yeah we
are.” She says. I laugh and hug her. My question is burning in my throat. “Temp
will you be my maid of honor?!” I exclaim excitedly. “If you’ll be mine.” She
says back. my eyes widen. “But what about your sisters?” I ask in disbelief,
she shrugs. “Like you said, you’ll be my sister too.” She says simply I laugh.
“then yes, definitely yes!” I say and hug her for the fifth time. She laughs
and hugs me back. “we’ve got a deal.” She says. © 2012 beautiful dreamer |
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Added on November 10, 2012 Last Updated on November 11, 2012 Authorbeautiful dreamerGarrett, INAboutHey there stranger nice to meet you! First off my real name is Jen. Short for Jenny which is short for Jennifer. All you Jennifer’s out there know how it is :P I love to dance. I danced.. more..Writing
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