Snow White

sorry if it's not very good.

     Int. Palace-Day-Middle of winter
     Snowflakes falling like feathers from the sky, queen at the window embroidering. Queen pricks finger and blood falls on the snow outside. Queen makes a wish.

Queen
Oh that I had a child as white as snow,
Red as blood, and as black as ebony!

     Int. Palace-Day-Many years later
     Stepmother in secret place speaking to looking glass.

Stepmother
Looking Glass upon the wall,
Who is the fairest of them all?

Looking Glass
You are the fairest of them all.

Stepmother
That is correct.

     Int. Palace-Day
     Stepmother in secret place speaking to looking glass

Stepmother
Looking Glass upon the wall,
Who is the fairest of them all?

Looking Glass
Queen you are full fair ‘tis true, but
Snow-White fairer is than you

     Int. Palace-Day
     Stepmother in the throne room speaking to Huntsman

Stepmother
Take the child out into the woods so
That I may set my eyes upon her no more.
You must put her to death and
Bring to me her heart.

Huntsman
Yes milady.

     Ext. Woods-Later that day
     The Huntsman was about to pierce Snow-White’s innocent heart when she began to weep.

Snow-White

Oh Dear huntsman, do not
Take my life; I will go away
Into the wild wood and n’er come
Home again.

Huntsman
Away with you then poor child.

     Int.-Palace-Day
     Huntsman brings boar heart to Stepmother.

Huntsman
Her heart you majesty.

Step-Mother
Perfect…

     Int.-Dwarf Home-Evening (fading light)
     Snow White enters the home

Snow-White
I am so tired, and
Hungry, and thirsty.

     Int. Dwarves home-Night
     7 little dwarves enter home.

Dwarf #1
Who has been sitting
In my little chair?

Dwarf #2
Who has been eating
From my little plate?

Dwarf #3
Who has been taking
My little loaf?

Dwarf #4
Who has been tasting
My porridge?

Dwarf #5
Who has been using
My little fork?

Dwarf #6
Who has been cutting
With my little knife?

Dwarf #7
Who has been drinking
From my little cup?

Dwarf #1
Who has been lying
On my bed?

Dwarf #2
And mine.

Dwarf #3
And mine.

Dwarf #4
And mine.

Dwarf #5
And mine.

Dwarf #6
And mine.

Dwarf #7
Come look. Someone
Is in my bed.

All
Oh goodness! Oh gracious!
What beautiful child is this?

     Int. Dwarves home-Morning
     Snow-White finishing up how she had gotten to their humble abode.

Snow-White
…And that is how
I found your home.

Dwarf #1
If you keep the
House for us,

Dwarf #2
And cook,

Dwarf #3
And wash,

Dwarf #4
And make the beds,

Dwarf #5
And sew and knit,

Dwarf #6
And keep everything tidy
And clean,

Dwarf #7
You may stay with us,

Dwarf #1
And you shall lack nothing.

Snow-White
With all my heart.

Dwarves leaving to mine.

Dwarf #3
Beware of your
Step-mother.

Dwarf #5
She will soon know
You’re here.

Dwarf #7
Let no one into the house.

     Int. Palace-Day
     Step-mother in secret place speaking to the mirror on the wall.

Step-Mother
Looking-glass upon
The wall, who is the
Fairest of us all?

Looking-Glass
Queen, thou art of beauty
Rare, but Snow-White living
In the glen with seven little
Men is a thousand times

more fair.

Step-mother
That man must have
deceived me. how then,
can I make an end of Her?
Ah-ha! I’ve got it!

     Ext.-Glen-Day
     Step-mother in the glen looking like an old peddler woman.

Step-mother
Fine wares to sell!
Fine wares to sell!

Snow-White
Good day, good woman.
What have you to sell?

Step-Mother
Good wares, fine wares,
Laces of all colors.

Snow-White (thought)
I need not be afraid
Of letting in this
Good woman.

Step-mother
What a figure you are
Child! Come and let me
Lace you up properly
For once.

The Step-mother laced her up quickly and tightly. And she fell as though she were dead.

Step-Mother
Now you are done with
being the fairest.

     Int.-House-Night
     7 Dwarfs cut the lace and Snow-White begins to breath again.

Snow White
…and then I’m waking
Up to all of you and
It’s night.

7 Dwarves
The old peddler woman must
Have been the wicked queen.
You must not let anyone in
when we are not here.

     Int. Palace- Night
     Stepmother in room speaking to the looking-glass.

Stepmother
Looking-Glass upon the
Wall, who’s the fairest
Of us all?

Looking-Glass
Queen, thou art of beauty
rare, but snow white living
in the glen with 7 little men
is a thousand times more fair.

Step mother
Well then I guess I will
Have to kill her by
Other means.

     Ext. Glen-Day
     Stepmother dressed as an old woman selling wares.

Stepmother
Good wares to sell!
Good wares to sell!

Snow White
Go away! I must
not let anyone in.

Stepmother
But you are not forbidden
To look. Now for once
Your hair shall be
Properly combed.

Snow white falls down senseless

Stepmother
Now paragon of beauty,
This is the end of you.
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!

     Int. Palace-Night
     Stepmother in the same hidden room once again.

Stepmother
Looking-Glass upon the wall,
Who is the fairest of us all?

Looking-Glass
Queen thou art of beauty
Rare, but Snow white
Living in the glen with
7 little men, is a thousand
Times more fair.

Queen shaking with anger.

Stepmother
SNOW WHITE SHALL DIE!!!
Though it should cost me
My life.

     Ext. Glen-Day
     Stepmother visiting snow white as an old peddler woman.

Snow white
I dare not let anyone in;
The dwarfs said not to.

Stepmother
All right. I can easily
Get rid of my apples else where.
There, I will give you one.

Snow White
No. I dare not take anything.

Stepmother
Are you afraid of poison?
Lo! I will cut it in half,
You can have the red side and
I will have the white side.

Snow white takes a bite of the red side and falls down dead. Stepmother looks down at her and laughs.

Stepmother
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!
As white as snow, as red as
Blood, as black as ebony!
Snow white! This time the
Dwarfs will not be able to bring
You back to life again.

     Int. Palace-Day
     Step mother in room… again.

Stepmother
Looking-Glass upon the wall,
Who is the fairest of us all?

Looking-Glass
You are the fairest
of them all.

     Int. Dwarfs Home- Night
     The dwarfs are Lamenting over Snow White’s death.

First Dwarf
We cannot hide her away
In this black ground.

The Other 6 Dwarfs nodding in agreement

     Ext. Mountain-Day
     Snow White is in a glass coffin on top the mountain. A prince wants her even though she is dead.

Prince
Let me have the coffin,
And I will give whatever
You ask for it.

First Dwarf
We could not part
with her.

Second Dwarf
For all the gold
In the world.

Prince
I beseech you give it me.
For I cannot live without
Looking at Snow White. If
You consent, I will bring
You great honor, and care
For you as if you were my
Brethren.

     Ext. On the road to the Prince’s Castle- Day
     Someone holding one side of the coffin trips and the piece of apple comes up. Snow White opens her eyes, alive and well.

Snow White
Oh dear! Where am I?

Prince (joyfully)
You are near me!… I would
Rather have you than any thing
in the world. Come with me to my
Fathers castle and be my bride.

Snow White
As you wish.

Int. Palace- Day
Stepmother in secret room.

Step mother
Looking glass upon the wall,
Who is the fairest of us all?

Looking Glass
O Queen, thou art of
Beauty rare, but the young
Bride is a thousand times more
Fair.

Step mother
Aarrrrrgh! How could
This happen?! Maybe I
Should not go. Gut then
I may not have peace ‘til
I see who this bride is.

     Ext. Other palace-Day
     Stepmother sees that the bride is Snow White.

Step mother(Thinking)
Snow White?! Bu-bu-but but
She was dead! I saw her!
Dead as a doornail!

     Ext. Courtyard-Day.
     Stepmother dancing in red hot iron shoes.

Step mother
Curse you snow white!

Falls down dead.

Prince
Good Riddance!

Snow White
Yes. Good riddance.

Author's Note

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Reviews

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[Melissa Blossoms]

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[mamachansensei]

Short sweet and to the point. It would make a good cartoon.

[Jenni-Chan]

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