Humans

humans is all i have to say.

Humans
Humans are funny.
They are very funny.
You see they are like this.

Humans
Humans are like wolves.
They either go the path
of the pack, or they go
the path of the lone wolf.

Humans are funny.
Sometimes they don't
even know how funny
they are.

Humans
Most humans think
that they are never
watched and think
they can get away
with anything.

But for the most part,
they are funny cause
I think they act like
wolves.

They either take the path
with the rest of the pack,
or they choose the path
of the lone wolf.

Which one do you choose?

Reviews

[Wabbajack]

I would probably be with a pack, then go off on my own for some reason and end up getting lost. Then I would miss my pack and go searching for them. Upon finding them, I'd be like "Sup? I'm back." and they'd be all "Waaaaah we were so worried that you'd been eated by a bear or a sasquatch!" To which, I would reply, "Nah, squatches don't like it here." 'Cuz of course, I know all about sasquatches. For example, I SPELLED SASQUATCHES RIGHT YOU STUPID SPELL CHECK THINGY!! I'M ONE OF THOSE OCD PEOPLE WHO ABSO-FREAKING-LUTELY MUST SPELL EVERYTHING RIGHT!!! (Correction: absolutely) And the rest of the pack would just stare at me as if I were having a mental breakdown after so much aggravated yelling, and I'd stare back as if they were the ones who'd lost their marbles. ...Stupid marbles...

El Fin

[mamachansensei]

I think for myself but I like my pack.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Kinda hard for me to say. I always have been a bit of a lone wolf. Yet I have developed sensational social skills over time for being so to myself... ... Now, one would expect humans to be more like apes rather than wolves, seeing how we came from primates.

[kataylor11]

i think i would choose the pack. i could survive as a lone wolf for a while, but after so long i would miss being in a pack.

[Erika]

I like alot. Pack wolf all the way :)

[TheKaylaPup]

I like your idea, but the poetry aspect itself needs a little work. Also, the path of the pack. would you mind if I wrote a poem of my own off your idea?

[Dr. Kittin]

:D I liked it. Personally, I'd rather be with a pack.... I don't like being lonely. ^.^