Broken

For the Twitter Fiction (140 characters) contest: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/8350/. This story is 140 characters exactly, including punctuation and disregarding spaces.

       "Some days, I feel so lost here," she whispers from her perch on the swing set, bare feet dangling in the sand. 

        I bite my lip, but don't answer.

        She never mentions it again.

Author's Note

Any review/comment is still appreciated. Thanks.

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

Really nice, poigant (is that how you spell it???) piece. Beautifully written and well presented, I connected well tp both characters, good job!!!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Twitter contest!

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

great! hope you win the contest xD

[~Shadow Kissed~]

nice :)