Thean

What are you doing Thean?

Can you not see your hurting her arm?

Perhaps its a melancholy game,

A circling revenge.

What were you thinking Thean?

You can not dangle those thoughts!

The stained knight takes his own head,

This stems the rage.

Have you no humanity Thean?

What would her mother say?

He looks like you,

Yes you standing there.

Where does it end Thean?

Must I read you a mirror?

None are fooled,

It was I who was the author. 

Author's Note

Do not take it too seriously. I hardly ever edit anything.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

This is very . . . interesting, to say the least. Not bad, and not totally understandable at first--but very thought provoking

[Lexy]

this is a good but odd poem

[.........]

"Thean". As I said I would, the minute I saw it written I knew. The entire poem makes sense now. One suggestion since I taught you how to use semicolons. You could use one if you wanted to at this point- "None are fooled; it was I who was the author". I like the poem's creativity. Mirror images are great for descriptions, and my favorite line is, "must I read you a mirror?" As for where it ends, well Luke, I suppose that question has already been answered.

[Hayley]

Not commenting on your grammar :), In the last line of the second stanza, I would say
"That stems the rage", rather than, "This stems the rage". It would flow better, though that is just a suggestion.
This is filled with questions, kind of hopeless in the breeze I would say.