Nameless

I wrote this around 10 o'clock, February 27, 2011. I was crying my eyes out and literally just having a meltdown... a really bad one. I am surprised I could actually write cause I was shaking so bad.

Nameless

 

 

I miss your soft touch

            your warm smile

            your wierd laugh

            your constant texts

 

I try to move on

         to go on with life

         to love someone else

         to have a little fun

 

It only makes it harder

             when I see her with you

             you holding her close

             like you used to hold me

 

I cry myself to sleep

          holding my phone in one hand

          that cute stuff dog you got me for valentines in the other

          just wanting, waiting for that one text

 

I wake up in the middle of the night

              wishing it had been a dream

              wishing you were still mine

              before crying myself to sleep once more

 

She, that girl, had everything I ever wanted

                 everything I once had

                 everthing I loved so much

                 and the one that I loved the most

 

 

 

 

      YOU

 

Author's Note

I dont even think I could consider this a poem but oh well

This is to the one guy I didnt think I could live without...

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly structured and varied piece that lends itself to emotion felt by many, well done

[Canicus]

I like this poem. it's clear that you really cared for him. good write keep it up

[Red With An Attitude]

very touching. some great writings come from deep inside us, that we didn't know about.

[Seshat Nidaba]

I think poetry is a good outlet for you Skulli, of course it's a poem! And it's so emotional which is good.

"your constant texts" - aha, very born in the 90's of you! Fabulous.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a cute write. I think it was honest as well. I liked this a lot. Well written. Thanks for sharing. :)

[quinfinn]

beautifully written and poignantly personal and honest. i love it. if you love wolves i suggest you read my poem "howling". i think you will find it entertaining. good job!

[Moebia]

Aw :[ I'm sorry you felt bad. Sometimes we get too caught up in things, and don't realise that some people aren't not worth it. I've been there, done that. Hope you feel better :] It's the past so don't look back :D

I like this poem and the format of it. It's cool (all I can say). :D

-SaveME

[Kiri Nells]

You have got to be kidding me.. "I don't think I could consider this a poem." wtf? This is AMAZINGly good.