Waking Up Alone (1)

Twyla wakes up to find herself on a huge island, naked and clueless. She doesn't remember how she got there. She also discovers her new tattoo.

         The cool summer breeze twirled and whistled as it found its way out of the dense forest of the island. It danced down the sandy white beaches, going down to dip into the soft waves of the beautiful blue ocean every once in a while. The sun toasted the island lightly, making it comfortably warm.

 

It soon came across a ghostly pale body laying across the beach on the south side of the island. It caressed the girl's naked body, as if checking for any injuries. The salty ocean water lapped at her feet softly. The girl's eyes fluttered open, revealing deep pools of pale blue.

 

She jerked into a sitting position, wincing at the sudden sharp pain in her head and side. The girl ran her hands through her long tangled black hair, her bleached highlights glinting in the sunlight. She glanced around and took in her surroundings. The lush forest loomed over her, providings shade for her. Where am I? She asked herself as she slowly stood up. Her hands quickly brushed off the sand that stuck to her slim body. Then she noticed she was naked.

 

"Okay, where are my clothes!?" She asked to the air. Her eyes sweeped the area around her, making sure there wasn't any people. This is probably some silly joke.

Closing her eyes for a second she looked down at the sand. A black object on her leg distracted her for a moment. She leaned down to look at it and gasped. A long tattoo of a snake twirled down her right leg, from her knee to her foot. The head rested on her foot, its eyes a blood red color.

 

Her breathing became ragged as she tried to calm herself down. She couldn't remember how she got here. The last thing she remembered was walking through the door of her apartment. It had been dark, the only window closed and the lights off. 

 

"Mom?? Alec?? You guys home??" She had called into the empty darkness. After a few moments of no reply she threw down her pocket book by the door and made her way to the kitchen. She had called for her mom or brother once more as she flipped on the light. Then she remembered screaming then blackness engulfing her.

 

What did I scream for?? The girl asked herself, shivering but not from the cold.

 

 

 

 

And that was just the beginning of what lay ahead for Twyla on the island, her new home.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Its just the first chapter and I promise I will try to make them longer.

Sorry, it took for long. I know its not that good either :/

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

This was pretty suspenseful... On my way to the next chapter =]

[snopadelic]

This was an enjoyable read. it was very descriptive amd full of mystry. Will read on.

[The_Tom_Ward_Method.]

Nice! This was pretty good.
though i got awkward when you strted describing that she was naked. But you know how I am lol.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

i like this. its interesting and i really wonder where the book will go from this point. write more and send me more read requests!!

[halflives]

Hooray for chapter one! One question though; why is it rated M? Very good start. I'm terribly interested to see where you go with this.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Wonderful, nicely described and intense, really asks a lot of questions that I must say I want answering - nice job, keep it up!~

[Pssss I don't Exist.]

Its amazing:) I love the description and as always, it could be longer. Your an amazing writer your just lazy :P Get to work lol
I love you

[~Lizzy♬]

FINALLY!!!! The chapter is very good indeed, just maybe it should be longer. :/

Loved the descriptions girl, don't forget you're a great writer!

~Bookers~ (LIzzard)