Liar

Liar

A Poem by 122009

You’re broken inside

I can see it

You cry every night

Don’t you?

You’ve taken a blade

And done terrible things

I saw the marks you made

 

I’ve seen your fake smile disappear

When you think no one’s watching

You turn emotionless and empty

It’s painful to see

You keep saying you’re okay

Stop lying to me

 

I don’t know who you think you’re fooling

But you may as well stop all this pretending

© 2010 122009


Author's Note

122009
Eh.. this is really roughly done, not sure what to do to make it better.

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I really really like this one. It really paints a picture, a scene really. Just someone being so down and having such a hard time but refusing to ask for help or tell people what's going on. Very nicely done. Keep writing (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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