Rot

Don't ask

I never am one to leave

Yet I over stayed my welcome

Tonight I will kill you

Like you needed all along

You heart already stolen

Don’t worry you will see her again

In hell

In hell

When I am through with you

I will do her as well

Kill her and take her cold heart

The thing she took from you

She corrupted your mind

Like the witch she is

You will not even see it coming

If I don’t kill you

She will take your soul

At least that way you have a chance to go to heaven

Even if I never well

I do not mind

I will be in hell

Forever ever to torture her

The demon lust

She will kill you…

Therefore, I will do you both a favor

I will kill all of us

Send you to heaven

When you belong

Well I sit there laughing with the devil

As I watch her body burn in the flames

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild and crazy chapter. Very direct to the point. It was written with purpose and knowing the end. Last lines were very good. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Wow Ashley...scary and I can feel anger. I like it though. Thanks for sharing. :D

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Oh Ashley! This one is cool! Gave me shivers! xD I loved the flow of genuine emotion that burns throughout what you've writen! Keep it coming! xD

Kisses - Ash

[The Analog Kid]

I like the passion of hate in this. Then there is the hope for the lesser hated of the two. Pretty cool descriptions of torture.