one last hug

I was feeling down Just had to write something this sort of helped.

I wish I could whip all your worries away

Take away the pain you been hiding with a smile

The angel with the wand, I am

To make all your dreams never end

You should be something more

A good person, with a good heart

You already are

We all have complex minds

That no one can understand

We don’t understand ourselves and

No one can tell us who we are

I just wish, upon a golden star

That one day you will know

 

I wish I were there, though I know I should…

I wish I could wave a wand take those thoughts away

Wipe your mind free of the thoughts of that day

Take all the lies away

 

I know I cannot

I am not an angel

Just another human

With an inpure soul

Another child who cried in the dark

Who is afraid of what hides

Right outside my heart

 

I know what I feel

Is it real, I do not know?

I know you do not want me to…

I know I should leave you alone

I know it is best it is what you want

I care, too much, I know too much

I should just keep my mouth shut

Just make you happy, instead of make you worry

Why do I tell you my problems?

When you have your own

So much worse than my own

Yet… you never led on

 

If I could

I would hug you

I would show you

You are not facing this alone

 

We all have problems

Big and small

What are friends for…?

We help each other out

Make the other smile

Make life worth living for each other

 

Is that not what friends are for?

However, I know a hug

Will never take away the pain

Never remove the thoughts

The things said those days

 

It would still be nice

Even if we never speak again

One more hugs…

Can keep a cold heart warm for a lifetime

Just one more…

Reviews

[Stuff]

Added to my favorites.
It was really well put together and well-written. It has a rhythm to it, along with emotion slowly falling in between the cracks.
It makes sense, too, even though I don't know you at all.
Good job... I would like to read more of your work. (:

[Randolf Ramos]

I wish I could whip all your worries away
Take away the pain you been hiding with a smile
The angel with the wand, I am
To make all your dreams never end
You should be something more
A good person, with a good heart
You already are
We all have complex minds
That no one can understand
We don’t understand ourselves and
No one can tell us who we are
I just wish, upon a golden star
That one day you will know

-----How kind it is to be of another's friend that could take it all away someones pain. To be able to help someone realizes his or her own abilities is great.
Friend in time of need, to be able to accept that someone to be a part of our lifetime is even greater. It starts with oneself to reflect on our own beauties, capabilities and with your help you change someones life by being a catalyst of self know how and self know what.

Great you are truly a great person.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

A heartfelt writings.
Almost put a spell to whoever that reads it, very powerful too...
well done Ashley..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I was overwhelmed by the amount of honesty and heart you poured into this poem. The emotions you have expressed seem to show that you are anything but the typical young adult in your peer group. It is surprising to see feelings on this scale being experienced by someone who could easily not have a care in the world. I was moved by your words.

[Brown Bull]

I think a hug can be very powerful.

[Matthew Kult]

Great work.

With Love,

Jaidyn

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice.

[Wolfwind Words]

Fantastic! This is a beautifully crafted tapestry of heart and truth. You have taken feelings and created one of the finest pieces of poetry i've read in a long time!

Great Ink!

[The Analog Kid]

Nice phrasing. Yeah, I guess it takes a lifetime to learn to keep our mouths shut more often. Very heartfelt.

[r]

This is so sad!! The emotions are so strong, and yeah. This makes me want to cry. It's so emotional and beautiful. Amazing. I hope everything turns out well for you....and that you get more than one last hug. Because yeah. :)