one last hug

I was feeling down Just had to write something this sort of helped.

I wish I could whip all your worries away

Take away the pain you been hiding with a smile

The angel with the wand, I am

To make all your dreams never end

You should be something more

A good person, with a good heart

You already are

We all have complex minds

That no one can understand

We don’t understand ourselves and

No one can tell us who we are

I just wish, upon a golden star

That one day you will know

 

I wish I were there, though I know I should…

I wish I could wave a wand take those thoughts away

Wipe your mind free of the thoughts of that day

Take all the lies away

 

I know I cannot

I am not an angel

Just another human

With an inpure soul

Another child who cried in the dark

Who is afraid of what hides

Right outside my heart

 

I know what I feel

Is it real, I do not know?

I know you do not want me to…

I know I should leave you alone

I know it is best it is what you want

I care, too much, I know too much

I should just keep my mouth shut

Just make you happy, instead of make you worry

Why do I tell you my problems?

When you have your own

So much worse than my own

Yet… you never led on

 

If I could

I would hug you

I would show you

You are not facing this alone

 

We all have problems

Big and small

What are friends for…?

We help each other out

Make the other smile

Make life worth living for each other

 

Is that not what friends are for?

However, I know a hug

Will never take away the pain

Never remove the thoughts

The things said those days

 

It would still be nice

Even if we never speak again

One more hugs…

Can keep a cold heart warm for a lifetime

Just one more…

Reviews

[Stuff]

Added to my favorites.
It was really well put together and well-written. It has a rhythm to it, along with emotion slowly falling in between the cracks.
It makes sense, too, even though I don't know you at all.
Good job... I would like to read more of your work. (:

[melissa]

loved it, very well written:)

[HorrorMaster]

Aww very cute

[Mauricio Montoya]

This is most defiantly from the heart and I think you've done a great job. Excellent write

[Living Proof.]

Obsessed with this

[♥(heatherawesome..]

I lvoe it and keep up the awesome awesome work and keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppp it up?&heart;

[Kelley]

This was a great poem Ashley and I wish you the best of luck.

Kelley

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wonderful poem, I love it. Keep up the great work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with you. It is good to feel you are not alone. The poem story was very good. A kind word. A smile from a friend and a hug can change someone day. A excellent poem. Kindness can overcome great pain.
Coyote

[rwar ish me]

this is very lovely, keep writing.
One more hugs…
Can keep a cold heart warm for a lifetime
Just one more…
thats my favorite part :3

Its the perfect writing but only one thing spoiled it,your pain if you will continously write this type of poems then one day you really feel embarassing that can hurt you entirely