More than a friend.

A poem for someone who still loves a cheater...

I would do anything to make you smile

To laugh to sing

Anything to make your heart not as cold

As it once had been

Just lean on me, though small in stature

I will never fall over

I will never break

Do not let them hurt you anymore

Do not give in like you had before

She may say she loves you

But that is just bull

Playing with your emotions

Like you are some fool

Do not let her take your heart

To make it coal in her hands

Do not let her have your soul

To drain into sand

I want you to be happy

You deserve nothing but the best

She is just a liar

A user, nothing less

Anyone can say

A sweet word

A cute breath

Anyone can pretend to care

About that thing pumping your chest

Do not allow her to confuse you

Do not allow her to take you away

You are better then she will ever be

Today, tomorrow, everyday

You do not deserve a cheater

Who puts you on the sidelines?

Tell she wants to play

You do not deserve to be treated

That way

You deserve your own happy ever after

In this world

Not the one she lies about in every way

You think you deserve nothing

To allow your soul to be frozen

You would never understand

That I see it everyday

You smile like you are fine to me

Yet your eyes say…

She does not love me

Then why love her?

Why care for her

Why sell yourself to the devil

To the witch who will throw you away once more?

Why let yourself die every minuet

Of everyday

I cannot allow you

To give yourself away

Not if I have anything to say

Lean on me today

I will be your friend

Your angel

Your keeper, anything

I do not think I can spend

Another day with you so scared

So sad,

So used

So abused by her lies

I may not be her

Nor, seem to love you as much

Nevertheless, I do

You are a brother

A friend

Someone I could never live without

Do not let her tear you apart

Tell you will never be the same

Remember this

You are more to me than just a friend.

Author's Note

Don't hate me for this. This is how I truly feel. You may not feel the same... but I wish you would understand... Your are better without her...

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

a fictional reply to a true story.

I am sorry for what I did
Something my own heart forbid
I hurt you
something I said I wouldn't do
But I will not lie
You have every right to cry
and hate
and choose OUR fate.
I made a mistake.
My feelings for you arent fake.
He meant nothing to me.
and I was what I shouldn't be.
I deserve to be called a w***e
and if you say to I will walk out the door.
But I love you
I really really do.
I am asking for another chance
a new start, renewed romance.
Please baby, Please.


I love your honest in this piece, and you are doing what you are suppose to. I do hope in the end it works out for him, and for you. Great write. A few errors but nothing that takes away from the write. Great Job.

Regards,

Matthew

[Legion]

Nothing wrong with feeling this way. Good piece. I hope you let that person read it. If not, you should. Something to change though. I noticed that where you used the word "tell" in a few places should be the word "until" or "till". I saw that at least twice. Still, good write.

[HorrorMaster]

very sweet i understand how you feel.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Good job

[Liza]

it is very sweet of you to want to save a friend and be the hero
hopefully if you ever do find yourselves in love
you do not do more of the loving
to fill the void

[Coyote Poetry]

A good friend is always willing to assist and help someone in a bad situation. But sometime we must be careful. A lot of times most people can't see the bad things when blinded by love. A very strong poem. A hopeful poem of love and freindship.
Coyote.

the exact hit from your heart

[rwar ish me]

this is very good, And I so understand this. It is very good, keep writing!!!

[The Water Queen]

Raw emotion that is directed to someone makes this poem more real and emotional to the reader. You tell your feelings well and proudly. Great poem!!

[David W Moore III]

Very emotionally written. And the care for him shines through with a brilliance. As Matthew said, I hope it all works out.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

These are the spoken words of a true friend.