Nation in Chaos

 

I find myself in a situation of Chaos

my mind mixed-up and cluttered

It's a reign of terror stuck with unruliness

so many riots and rebellions but no revolution

All there is is an uneasiness and unrest

so much disorder trapped with confusion

It's a free-for-all a holy mess

A trap that I find myself stuck

By the time the evil is done

there well be no triumph

no one will rejoice

the pride that had once been

will never be again

There will be no celebration

no victory that the world is no longer at war

There will be sadness

lost. All the symbolic statues

all the characteristics that the flags stood for

the significant of all the things we were

everything will be lost.

The flags stars and stripes well be turned

no one well look at the large green statue

no more comfort in what it used to stand for

freedom will never stand as it's message

There is no more amiable

no more friendliness in what once was a peaceful place

nothing well be easy nothing well be cozy

when your sleeping on the ground

praying for the simple things

home cooking, warmth

leave them all behind, because they well never come again

Here it is, the signal of death
The signs of Nazis, in sight of what was a great nation

the death or all, fire, prisons

torture, tell me please, this isn't my future

a place of gray

can no one else see are my eyes the only ones

I want them to notice

our nation is no longer great

Reviews

[EverEmma]

I am in love with this. Extremely powerful in all means. These are the things we should be worrying about, not if our hair looks fine. This is a major problem in our societies and should be addressed immediately. I feel so gravitated towards issues like this and will literally sit in bed at night and yell at the world. ( well, not out loud). I thank you for gracing us with the pleasure of your work.

[raining]

by all means must we keep from seeing this as the future. well written.

[The Analog Kid]

This one speaks to me. You cover many of my sentiments. Right now, it is Liberty vs. Tyranny. It seems that the people that don't want to work are welcoming a dictator and socialism. It also seems almost hopeless, but we will slug it out, when the time comes. This is the best poem I have seen on here in a while.

[HorrorMaster]

Very powerful. Good poem

[zombiikillah666]

alot of thought in this.
great job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a moving an epic narrative that speaks to the heart of mankind~

[Ruth]

No longer great because people are having freedom taken away more and more each day!
There will be a day where we unite!
Beautifully moving piece of writing
xx

[chaotic katie]

i loved this it has so much power and wonderful imagry great job keep writing

[An owl on the moon]

This is a powerfully moving expression of the devastation left behind by war. We must learn peace... it just seems such a slow process. Thank you for this insightful work.

[X]

i love the the chaos, hey guess what? im in ohio RIGHT NOW and im going to the fireworks display at the lake, hope i can see you there!!!

[nyi]

i think you have made it all simpler...the nation in chaos often has very complicated issues and political matter....but you write in very simple way with simple words and so effective!...and the reason behind is that i think you are looking from Moral ground..everything becomes simpler..but in real life..i fear it does not work that way..well..tat's wat i believe anyway..this is truly powerful poem..and wise sentence like 'no victory for the world is not longer at war'..quite like this..great write..considering you r only 17!..