CA part 2

Well the locals were going through the mountains they found something odd, right on top of the stone wall that was still up there in the cold harsh mountain terrain was the a bundle. They were sure it was dead. As the mother was killed the night before, impregnate and the baby had been out in the cold. Still when a brave man lifted the bundle it moved, cried even.

 

The looked at the angel faced girl, her black hair only an inch or so long. She seemed so cold, wrapped in only a black silk blanket. She lived through the night. The snow around her untouched, she didn’t seem evil at all. It seemed as though they were all mistaken. There was a tag around the young girl’s neck, a name Baib, almost sounding like ‘babe’.

 

It was hard to decide, many believed the baby should have died. They all seen the large explosion from the village. They all seen the odd cloud that came, yet the snow wasn’t touched or burned. It hadn’t snowed to cover anything up. Still the star and everything that was a part of the thing cults plan was gone.

 

No one could get themselves to kill such a young child who seemed innocent so they done the only thing they could. They put the child in the foster home. This would have been an alright think. Other then the only orphanage was run by a woman who much less hated children. It was like being an orphan was the same as being a prisoner. The orphan was deep in the forest away from the village and children were more then poor since the woman never gave any of the money that the town saved for the orphans to the orphans.

 

The girl was taken to the woman who was in her early thirties. A rather fat woman who all she does it eat. She had no care of her looks and the children spent all their time cleaning and doing work. The woman loved punishment and didn’t like any noise. It was hard to believe but she was the only woman who would take the job. Most of the time women didn’t work. If they did they were teachers or helped on farms. Most women needed a man and that meant they had children of their own.

 

Mrs. Hiple was the only woman who would take the job, since most women had their own children or wanted their own. Besides Mrs. Hiple had no family. She was given a home and food and that was all she needed, she didn’t have to do any work, but that changed when she gotten the new child called Baib Tacaha.

Author's Note

xD someone try to figure out what the girl's name means. Baib Tacaha

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story you create in this chapter. From the mean woman who hate kids to the description of the teachers. You are create a very good story. I look forward to reading more. A excellent chapter.
Coyote