Out the door

What can I say

I’m stupid and I’m dumb

I have nothing to offer

But yet here I am

Maybe I’m just worthless

But I can’t end it here

For some reason I keep going

Though I want to end it here

What does it matter to you

If I'm here or not

All you see is yourself

You see me for what I’m not

I’ll never be perfect

Damn it

No one will ever be

We all make mistakes

Get used to it

Your not the leader

Your nobody just like me

Stop acting like you can control me

I have a life I know

I’m not you slave

Or anybodies

I have a human soul

What is with people like you

With money you think you can have it all

I don’t care if you’re the richest

Go a head and be with your b*****s

Because I’m not staying on more minute

I’m tired of this crap

Why did I get mixed up in it

All you do is tear me apart

Now I’m leaving with my broken heart

You can’t tell me what to say

You can’t make me stay no more

For here I go out the door

@all rights reserved by Ashley.M.E.

Reviews

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

There's so much emotion and power...I'm blown away! ;p

[Krishna]

Very intense and with much raw emotion -- well written and phrased. And in the case that this was written at someone from personal experience, I definitely endorse the use of poetry to express your feelings.

[jason larson]

wow that was just great i loveed it

[Tate Morgan]

It is interesting I wished it had something inspirational something to bring a smile to my face

[chaotic katie]

i loved it filled with lots of emotion and power and yet in a way very easy to relate to i love this peice great job keep writing o look forward to reading more of your work

[FlawedByDesign]

We are "all" flawed by design so you're no different than anyone, not just "him". Be stronger and don't let yourself be controlled by anyone and don't change for anyone, learn to walk away as you do at the end :)

Nicely done.

[zendikar]

line 2 dump should be dumb
line 10 i should be i'm
line 22 you should be your
line 29 minuet should be minute
line 33 tare should be tear

Other than that it's a really great write nice job!