Drip drip

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E

I’m tired of this

Drip drip

It’s all I hear

Drip drip

The sound of my tears

Drip drip

Shows me that I’m alone

Drip drip

I can’t get a grip

Drip drip

It’s just getting louder

Drip drip

Echoing through the brain

Drip drip

I can hardly stand

Drip drip

Why did you leave

Drip drip

Why did you go

Drip drip

I feel all alone

Drip drip

Now I know

Drip drip

I am alone

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Vria P Crow

d r i p
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love,

ria

Posted 11 Years Ago

Augustus

A very effective use of onomatopoeia with tears dripping all over the poem... And the short lines bring out the emotions conveyed in this poem vividly...It is very much like the halted words that a person speaks when he or she is crying....the repetition "why did you leave" and "why did you go" and also "I am alone" also speaks of the sinking feeling in the author's heart...well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago

chaotic katie

this poem was filled with lots of sad emotions and wonderful imagry and reminds me of a song i heard once before called drip drop anyways this was a really great peice great job keep writing because you are really good at it

Posted 14 Years Ago

zendikar

the repetition of words can be annoying but you pull it off well! nice work!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Kanattas Atir Enomo

wow. this piece is amazing. definitely one of my favorite. at first i thought the repetition would be annoying, but i found that i really loved it and it made this poem speaks levels more. this is just...amazing. i can't think of anything else to say. amazing job. great flow, message, it was clear, just....amazing