Liquid heart

It’s melting away

Into a puddle of nothingness

For the thing I held so close so dear

Tore about and gone in a matter of moments

It didn’t shatter

It couldn’t

For my liquid heart

Was all that mattered

Did you see

Did you care

How you just left me there

For I cried it out

My chest left bare

As my liquid heart just sat right there

I tired so hard to give you it all

You never seen

You never cared

So now I stand alone in the rain

As I’m lost in this water

That took away my sanity

For you didn’t want all of me

Now the largest part of me

Has left to find security

For I just gave it away

Reviews

[Martina]

For I just gave is away - Gave "it" away?

I can relate to this- it's so thoughtful. I can feel the pain you feel. It's awful to know that someone else also experiences the same heartache I feel. Life goes on though, right? I love how you make liquid a reoccurring theme - liquid hearts, rain, puddles, tears. Really great write.