Wonder of a child

Wonder of a child

A Chapter by Ashley.M.E

The eyes of wonder

Searching the world

Seeing the ocean

Seeing the sky

They don’t know why

They don’t care to know

They just think

Amazing

So tall

So big

The world around them is

Just a speck they are

But they don’t care

They’re just beginning

Just discovering the world

Smiling and laughing

At everything

They love

They care

They feel the world

They wonder more

Then any of us can imagine

And usually they can’t tell us

What goes on

In a child’s mind

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© 2010 Ashley.M.E


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This was fantastic! The children see life in a fresh and giant way. Everything is new and yet untainted by the society in which they will eventually have to grow into. Your ink flows with the very peace and awe that a young child will feel and see.
This piece made me feel like I could drift with the clouds and run with the horses, no care in the world....just freedom.

Awesome Ink Ashley!
Hugs - Wolfie


Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful poem.

"They love
They care
They feel the world"
How true. Seriously, if we adults could get ourselves to care as much as children do, the world would be an infinitely better place to live in.

Very well written, innocent poem. Loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love this. It's magical to catch the perspective of a child, but i think you meant "wonder" and not "Wander". Keep it the same if I'm wrong, tho.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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