Body within

Without my eyes

I can not see

Without my lips

I can not speak

Without my ears

I can not hear

Without my hands

I can not feel

 

Without any senses

Just a voice in the wind

No different than the others

The difference comes from with in

 

I see who you are

You see who I am

Without the face

The skin

The eyes

The voice

The looks

 

Now you know me

And I know you

For all you are

In your mind

The soul within

Without a disguise

You are open

As am I

For I can see you

Without my eyes

@all rights reserved by Ashley.M.E.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This has got to be the most profound and beautiful piece of poetry i've ever read. It tells of the strongest bond that people can share...that of simply knowing... like an invisible thread of connection that says more than any mere sense can share.
I loved the way this piece smoothly brings us to a common cosmic truth.

Fantastic Ashley!
Hugs!
Wolfie

[zappy]

wow great poem

[Devons]

A really nicely written and paced poem, that is a fine testament to the inner-sight of the soul; the things that we pick up on that maybe are part of a sixth sense...Something that is often overlooked in day-to-day existence. But you have brought it to the fore with great clarity, almost like teaching a lesson.
Good work.

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

great poem and full of emotion. i caught a few typos though. you put "me ears" instead of "my ears" and "then the others" as opposed to "than the others" but a really great poem nonetheless. good job